Hi Ben,
I accessed the document with no difficulty.
In the Bibliography you included ISO standard references. Are you
thinking to include a paragraph on CF-netCDF data model mapping to
ISO abstract entities (e.g. coverage geometries defined in ISO 19123)?
Beyond that, if you are interested in being part of the actual
standards definition process, it will be extremely important
participate in the OGC CF-netCDF working group which will be set up
soon. That means that you have to be associated with an
organization that is an OGC member. So this would be a good time
to find out who the official OGC rep is for your organization and
have the rep set you up with access to OGC working groups and
documents on the OGC portal.
I am interested in being part of the standards definition process,
and participate in the OGC CF-netCDF working group.
Best,
--Stefano